Wednesday, October 26, 2016

The Old May Not Be Bold!

Ever go back and look at where you started? It was like the cat just farted. You know, nothing but gas. Boy, was that a mass.

Back to the start.
You threw a dart.
Seeing what stuck.
Really though, what the fluck?

Spelling was bad.
Drive Grammar Nazi's mad.
Maybe even the cat.
I shake my head at that.

An on and on.
A run on con.
Convoluted a bit.
What was with it?

Thoughts on a roll.
Out they did stroll.
Rambling away.
Hmm, I may do that still at play.

A rip off too.
Damn, my zoo.
That brings shame.
But it lit a flame.

Time goes on.
No longer a con.
The groove does dawn.
Sacrifice the pawn.

Time for the knight.
Cat sees the light.
A that and this,
Sure switches for bliss.

Easier to read.
Spelling takes seed.
A cat learned to spell.
Isn't that swell?

Even a book,
At my nook.
Well more than one.
Having over 100 is fun.

Much came due,
From start to new.
Or start to now.
But I'll still raise an eyebrow.

I was just checking for dead links here and there, as they supposedly drag down your lair, and saw some of the cat's spelling. Surprised the grammar nazi's weren't yelling. Ever look at your old posts to see how far you've come? They can be scary and then some. But really they weren't too bad in mass. I was just a blog noob little rhyming ass.

Later all, have a nice fall.

92 comments:

  1. Replies
    1. #1 again
      not without pain!

      Hank

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    2. There he is
      Doing the number one biz!

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    3. Blue posted at 2:22...
      Can it be true?

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    4. Got on in
      Wonder what seconds gave a spin
      I will see
      What came to be

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    5. It was 2:22:29
      That did align

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    6. Ha that is interesting at your sea
      Thanks for checking what came to be

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    7. Easy to look
      Unless milliseconds you wanted to book

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    8. Nope, too late
      7 seconds to mate

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  2. Great theme Pat. enjoyed the read.
    Yvonne.

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  3. The Old May Not Be Bold!
    Not to take what is told
    Old is strong
    Nothing wrong
    Stamp authority of the old

    Hank

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    1. Authority it has indeed
      As it allowed much to take seed

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  4. Someone featured my very first post last year as part of a guest spot and wow was it lame. At least it has some comments now though.

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    1. haha yep, mine was lame too
      As were the following few

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    2. I destroyed mine. It was that lame. So now I'm curious... I may have to take a look at that first post of yours, Ninja.

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    3. Destroyed it you did
      Didn't let one make a bid

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    4. Well, Blue took down his site for a bit
      so all was gone as he called it quit

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    5. Blue had 2 sites a long while back
      I guess the english class had a heart attack

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    6. I guess that was before my time
      Another blog so sublime..

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    7. Yeah, he hid that one away
      First one I found him on at my bay

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    8. The Cat's got a good memory, all right
      The English class got me into a bit of trouble at my site day and night
      Might tell you that story one day
      What happened back then was not okay
      Stalkers aplenty in the place to be
      And no Scooby Doowee

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    9. Ahhh so it was a mess
      You'll have to confess
      Stalkers are no fun
      Been there with one

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    10. The powers that be
      Spying on me
      Stalkers too
      But no Scooby Doo
      So I say, "Go to hell!"
      That made some yell
      I got the boss ill
      As I was ready to kill
      If you know what I mean
      At the Kitty Cat scene

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    11. A poison drop
      For their flop
      Stalkers galore
      From your work shore

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  5. Life changes, so our posts etc. need to change too. Guess it all depends what is going on in our lives and the cats lives.

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    1. Yeah, that is how it goes
      With life's highs and lows

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  6. I do read back the posts I made
    Most were incredibly long
    I have learned to shorten them
    Which I think wasn't wrong

    Betty

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    1. Unless you have a lot to say
      Then may have to let it fly at your bay

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  7. If I may be so embolden
    People think their every word is golden

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    1. That many do
      I know some of mine are poo

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  8. That Grammar Nazi line
    will give all critics something on which to dine.
    haha. Loose the apostrophe.
    They will think it scary.

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    1. haha and that is why I stuck it in
      That one was on purpose at my bin

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  9. Twas a different world
    at the start
    I could almost call it art.

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    1. Art of the scary
      Things were quite hairy

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  10. ups and downs but generally pleased
    not too many errors, my heart not seized
    by pangs of remorse

    I'd like to think my writing does improve
    we've all found our groove

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    1. Eventually we find it and still get better
      With each and every typed letter

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  11. Memories of my posts in the past,
    have taught me lessons that I hope will last.

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    1. A lesson is a good way
      When each posts come to play

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  12. I have my first manuscript...a total mess.

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  13. I couldn't imagine having over 100 books published.

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    1. Kids ones are easier to do
      As the word count is a few

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  14. Well, I wasn't a professional when I started, and I'm still not, so I can't say my posts are much improved!

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    1. haha maybe a little bit
      To make them a hit

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  15. Those dead links do tend to smell up the place!

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  16. Even the meanest of Grammar Nazis give some leeway to bloggers. Most bloggers write their posts rather quickly, and not all proofread them. Heh.

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    1. haha yeah, I'd have way more
      If I didn't give it a second glance at my shore

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    2. Hey, if you use a phone spell check
      likes to re-arrange, a scary game.. Haha

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    3. Yeah, that is a pain
      Can drive one insane

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  17. Replies
    1. She left because her url went poof
      She didn't renew it, the goof

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    2. I figured as much.
      She needs a reboot, is what she needs.

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    3. Playing with us
      Beats waiting for a bus

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    4. Any old day
      But she won't play

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  18. I see progression and growth in my previous posts, spelling mistakes and all, but its all part of that frozen moment in time. Greetings to you!

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    1. That it surely is
      All plays a part with the blogging biz

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  19. If only it were just the spelling. :)
    Bad links are a sour note though. Need to do some clean up myself. Oh dear, another task for the to do list!

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    1. It can take a good long while
      Especially when posts extend past a mile

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  20. Well, I am still learning
    When I came on I was a mess
    I guess I still am, I confess

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    1. A more experienced mess
      More not less lol

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    2. Haha a mess is still a mess
      It's the way I am I guess

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    3. haha beats all tidy as can be
      At ones sea

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  21. Looking back at my mistakes and accomplishments help me look forward and see what needs to be done, NOW!

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    1. That is a good way to be
      At anyones sea

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  22. Where I began
    Is a long time gone.
    Now here I am
    Blogging about songs.

    Arlee Bird
    Tossing It Out

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    1. Singing a tune
      Beats a dish with a spoon

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  23. I'm approaching a blog anniversary next week and I hope I've improved over the years, but it's still a learning process.

    Thoughts in Progress
    and MC Book Tours

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    1. Always something to learn
      At every turn

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  24. orlin N cassie...we haz looked bak at sum oh R old postz.....sum kewl scaree howl o ween stuff goin on ther... with what waz comin outta R mouthz ~~~~ its like...WTF waz we thinkin ~~~~~~♥♥♥☺☺☺

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    1. lol wtf is a good way
      to look at some at play

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  25. critics are more than a few
    and oh are the words that they spew
    yet all of the fans we accrue
    we wonder if any were true

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  26. No one looks I fear
    At how far I've come since my first smear
    But perhaps that's a good thing
    Old boo boos would surely sting

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    1. Boo boos can stink
      See them as back they wink

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  27. I'm just glad that I kept writing. At least I can say when I look at my past posts that I've improved. Haha. I am my worst critic.

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    1. Yep, looking away
      Shows improvement at ones bay

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  28. We've come a long way...when I started blogging, I hesitated to use cat vocaburary like "purrfect" and "Caturday." Now I use cat words all the time. My iPad has given up to auto collect :-)

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    1. haha IPad learned it
      I use them a bit

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  29. I haven't looked at any old posts of mine but I'm certain I will cringe as well. As for grammar...I suck I believe.

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  30. All the time. I've slowly been going through and deleting old posts that are no longer relevant to the blog and cringe, especially at some of the crummy photos that I posted.

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    1. Looking at them can make one cringe
      I sure went on a binge

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  31. Nah, I don't want to go back where I started!
    I think I was much better back then....smiles
    and I don't want to consciously observe that!

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    1. haha there is a twist
      AS better was missed

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